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Hi! I'm [personal profile] luzula, and [personal profile] jjhunter found a post I'd made in my journal about reading poetry out loud and asked if I wanted to post about it here during this week. So here I am. : )

I am--kind of a random poetry reader? I mean, I don't actively hunt for new poetry the way I hunt for new fiction or new music. But sometimes I'll stumble over poetry that really moves me and then I'll track down more poetry by that author. Stuff I have found this way and which I love include C. D Wright, Ursula K. Le Guin's translation of the Tao Te Ching, and the Swedish-Finnish poet Eva-Stina Byggmästar (I am Swedish myself). I used to write poetry when I was younger, but it was just for my own private purposes, kind of like a diary. Nowadays my creative writing energy is channeled into writing fan fiction instead.

I also do a good deal of amateur audiobook recording, mostly podfic, but I also record at Librivox, which is an awesome volunteer site dedicated to recording public domain books and other writings (including poetry) and releasing them back into the public domain.

Here is my plan for this week:

- a post about reading poetry aloud and why it appeals to me. I'll also share one of my Librivox recordings.
- a post about setting poetry to music, which is something I've done almost since I was young enough to read. I'll share some recordings here, too.
- a post about another person's recording of a poem that changed how I experienced the poem.

I'll keep to public domain poems, so as not to break the guidelines on the comm profile.

Right, I'll end with a bite-sized poem that I've recorded. (Rather bleak, I know. It, um, inspired me to write a story from the POV of someone turning into a zombie, which I bet is not what Walter de la Mare was thinking about. *facepalm*):



November, by Walter de la Mare

There is wind where the rose was, 
Cold rain where sweet grass was, 
And clouds like sheep 
Stream o'er the steep 
Grey skies where the lark was. 

Nought warm where your hand was, 
Nought gold where your hair was, 
But phantom, forlorn, 
Beneath the thorn, 
Your ghost where your face was. 

Cold wind where your voice was, 
Tears, tears where my heart was, 
And ever with me, 
Child, ever with me, 
Silence where hope was.

Date: 2011-12-05 10:08 pm (UTC)
alee_grrl: A kitty peeking out from between a stack of books and a cup of coffee. (Default)
From: [personal profile] alee_grrl
I love hearing things read aloud, particularly poetry. It really can change the way you understand a poem. Thank you for sharing this. Your reading of it was lovely.

Date: 2011-12-06 12:22 am (UTC)
jjhunter: Watercolor of daisy with blue dots zooming around it like Bohr model electrons (Default)
From: [personal profile] jjhunter
Oh wow. This is going to be such a cool week. I really, really like your recording of 'November' (and am very jealous of your microphone). Those last three lines-- I'm struck by the quick quietness of 'ever with me', and how you said it the same way with the same inflection both times, which makes 'Child' stand out so. I like how you read unrushed, how the pace is steady. Your accent (you said you're Swedish?) is not one I've encountered before, but I love how it sounds over the vowels and the w's, like, I dunno, this is silly, but like the texture of warm, fine knitted wool.
Your ghost where your face was
Was this the zombie-inspiring line?

Heh. Anyway, it occurs to me that some of the people on the comm might not be as familiar with giving feedback for how someone reads (performs? recites? says? speaks? is there an all-around verb that's usually used to describe how someone reads a piece of poetry?) a piece of text; do you have links you'd recommend? I dug out two posts from [community profile] pod_aware which include Podfic Feedback Toolbox: 5 ways to give great podfic feedback and was planning on including that in the promo post, but other than that I'm a bit at sea.

Date: 2011-12-06 01:11 pm (UTC)
jjhunter: Drawing of human JJ in ink tinted with blue watercolor; woman wearing glasses with arched eyebrows (JJ inked)
From: [personal profile] jjhunter
ZOOM H2? *drools* I know what I wish people would give me for Christmas...

I've been using my computer microphone to record my singing & (recently) poetry and podfic (e.g. my recent recording of Billy Collins' poem 'Forgetfulness'), but I keep getting this darn echo effect that's really, really irritating.

Date: 2011-12-07 08:57 am (UTC)
From: [personal profile] lynnoconnacht
I dunno, this is silly, but like the texture of warm, fine knitted wool.

Not silly at all! I (almost?) always end up with textures when I try to describe the sound of things. I try to use it in my writing, but the textures are hardly ever very clear or easily put into words, which makes that harder to do.

Thoughts

Date: 2011-12-06 02:23 am (UTC)
ysabetwordsmith: Cartoon of me in Wordsmith persona (Default)
From: [personal profile] ysabetwordsmith
I am not into audio recordings myself, although I enjoy hearing poetry read out loud in person. I do like to encourage podcast poetry because it reaches a whole different audience of people who gravitate to sound rather than text.

You're welcome to look through my published poetry for stuff that you might wish to record; I have a LOT of it posted online. Also I'm doing a live poetry activity on Tuesday, with a theme of "chocolate and other foods," if you'd like to observe that.

Re: Thoughts

Date: 2011-12-06 03:09 am (UTC)
jjhunter: Watercolor of daisy with blue dots zooming around it like Bohr model electrons (Default)
From: [personal profile] jjhunter
Really? Audio recordings of music too? The difference between, say, being in the stands live at a baseball game versus wanting it on a tv screen have always been so vast to me to the point where I love the former and find the latter low on my list of things to do, but music and the spoken word...hm.

What characterizes hearing poetry read aloud in person versus hearing a recording of it that makes one enjoyable for you and not the other?

Re: Thoughts

Date: 2011-12-06 03:30 am (UTC)
ysabetwordsmith: Cartoon of me in Wordsmith persona (Default)
From: [personal profile] ysabetwordsmith
>>Audio recordings of music too?<<

No, I like music and songs. I don't much care for spoken-word audio, with a few extremely rare exceptions. Also, I use music and songs -- and also environmental sounds -- for background, not for primary entertainment. I'm doing something else.

It's the time investment. I read at blinding speed. Seriously, I can read a novel in half a day. Listening to something is so slow it's aggravating. I can't easily do something else at the same time, and I get bored.

In person, I'm at an event not just listening to entertainment. I can watch the people and pick up on the energy. I also have a chance to talk with the poets afterward, most of the time. So that's different for me.

Re: Thoughts

Date: 2011-12-06 01:16 pm (UTC)
jjhunter: Drawing of human J.J. in red and brown inks with steampunk goggle glasses (red J.J. inked)
From: [personal profile] jjhunter
(Well, okay, I have been known to walk around outside with my nose in a book, but it's certainly not ideal. *g*)
I have been known to go bumping into people and apologizing to trees while walking & reading at the same time. I do not recommend attempting to walk, read, cross the street, and drink hot tea at the same time, however -- that's how I accidentally broke the spine of my nice copy of Crime & Punishment (and luckily not my neck).

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