This poem feels very much like an impressionist painting to me -- just enough detail re: the setting to set the tone for the final line. Is "the sun westering" a literal translation? It's a very lyrical fragment, and 'westering' is a gerundive I intend to tuck away for my own eventual use.
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Date: 2012-03-09 12:53 pm (UTC)Thank you for sharing it. :o)