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Strange Horizons, 5 February 2001

Ghost Lakes


Deserts sometimes dream of water.

Lost lakes gleam in the noon heat shimmer,

rippling faintly just above the ground --

the juniper sways in remnant currents,

remembers seaweed,

and impertinent fish.

You think you can feel it;

a cool breath chills your sweat,

and your cheek turns with the tide.

The lakes might have lived forever,

but drought came, water drained away,

and the fish crawled into stones to sleep.

You can find them still,

at Green River, in Wyoming,

where incandescent sand blew in on the west wind.

The corpses of lakes filled with camels,

with pronghorn antelope,

with the many wild dancers

for whom the desert was a keyhole,

through which they hastened out of the past,

water drying on their backs,

into the rejuvenated sun.

But on moonlit nights,

sky clear all the way up to the stars,

and coyotes strangely still,

the deserts sometimes dream of water,

and great fish swim, untroubled by the absent sun,

and scorn abandoned hooks,

their ancient scales shining with the moon.

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Date: 2011-11-01 05:19 pm (UTC)
From: [personal profile] herlander_refugee
That is very nice....and it is nice to have a wee bit of time to steal away from life to enjoy such a lyrical travelogue of time and place!

Thank you!

ghost lakes

Date: 2011-11-01 05:23 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
I am glad you like it. I think it's pretty obvious that the original idea for this poem came out of geology. I love to imagine what ancient environments were like and that they could somehow transmit more than just skeletons, shells, and rock into the present day. Also, somebody, perhaps it was RA Lafferty, wrote a story that included this kind of imagery and I found it enchanting.

Re: ghost lakes

Date: 2011-11-01 05:38 pm (UTC)
From: [personal profile] herlander_refugee
Yes, geology....but how can it fail to fascinate? I often find a bit of stone with bits of fern fronds, or the holes my children call "elf shots" where clams once burrowed in soft mud; and like this poem, those transport me to wonderful times and places!

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