Yeah, pretty sure second feedbacker also has no idea it's a villanelle. "I
really like how the last stanza incorporates all the rhymes." IT'S A
VILLANELLE.
ETA: Third feedbacker belatedly also has no idea it's a villanelle. "I liked that your last stanza was longer than the others, but maybe make it 5 lines?" VILLANELLE.
![[community profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/community.png){kind=small}
![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
timeasmymeasure
no subject
Date: 2014-03-09 04:24 pm (UTC):)
Yeah, pretty sure second feedbacker also has no idea it's a villanelle. "I really like how the last stanza incorporates all the rhymes." IT'S A VILLANELLE.
ETA: Third feedbacker belatedly also has no idea it's a villanelle. "I liked that your last stanza was longer than the others, but maybe make it 5 lines?" VILLANELLE.