Date: 2011-11-13 04:53 pm (UTC)
untonuggan: Pile of books (book)
From: [personal profile] untonuggan
I love the images in this poem, and the way the repetition of language/grammar brings the message home:

Time ate the stones;
It drank our health;
It stole our strength.


It reminds me a bit of "If you give a mouse a cookie..." in a good way. Well done!
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