Date: 2013-01-21 01:45 am (UTC)
cadenzamuse: Cross-legged girl literally drawing the world around her into being (0)
From: [personal profile] cadenzamuse
I am actually going to write a different third stanza as an exercise and answer to your question.

peel your clementines
like compass stars, and your trash
will bloom orange suns

silver and gold diadems
abandoned, tarnish and fade,

return to pumpkin
dust, Cinderella returns
to ash, you return



I will answer where I envision this going later, in case someone (JJ and Liz included) wants to continue from my third stanza variation.
If you don't have an account you can create one now.
HTML doesn't work in the subject.
More info about formatting

If you are unable to use this captcha for any reason, please contact us by email at support@dreamwidth.org

Profile

poetree: Paper sculpture of bulbuous tree made from strips of book pages (Default)
POETREE

February 2017

S M T W T F S
   1234
567891011
12131415161718
19202122232425
262728    

Most Popular Tags

Style Credit

Expand Cut Tags

No cut tags
Page generated May. 25th, 2025 09:59 pm
Powered by Dreamwidth Studios