poetree | Poetry Trick or Treat: Halloween Haiku

jjhunter

Since today is an open slot on our These Hallowed Days week, the admins are opening it up for trick or treating, poetry-style. If you start a new comment thread on this post with the subject line 'trick or treat: [your prompt]', the POETREE community is invited to write and reply to that thread with haiku inspired by your prompt that fits the category of 'trick' or 'treat'. We hope you enjoy exchanging haiku!

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From:

jjhunter

:o)

From:

untonuggan

select the best one
not too flat, oval, or round
I like the odd ones

Re: trick or treat: pumpkins

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spiralsheep - Date: 2012-10-31 01:38 pm (UTC) - Expand

Re: trick or treat: pumpkins

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zirconium - Date: 2012-10-31 02:49 pm (UTC) - Expand

Re: trick or treat: pumpkins

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spiralsheep - Date: 2012-10-31 03:17 pm (UTC) - Expand

Re: trick or treat: pumpkins

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zirconium - Date: 2012-11-01 02:08 am (UTC) - Expand

From:

alee_grrl

Scoop out the insides
slice in a smile, ear to ear
who needs a head

From:

raze

An optimist squash:
gouged, gutted, set alight - the
pumpkin only smiles.

Re: trick or treat: pumpkins

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spiralsheep - Date: 2012-11-01 10:31 am (UTC) - Expand

From:

cadenzamuse

I don't want to steal
you, orange and live-wired in
to autumn's colors

as leaves lay dying they show
their truest selves underneath

but pumpkins show true
when most round and full of life
cut open, light shines through

From:

primeideal

From:

spiralsheep

"Bus" is slang for "kiss". ;-P

Our older folk claimed
kissing is in season when
gorse is in flower.

The trick is that gorse is almost always in flower, so if it's clement enough weather to be outside looking at gorse bushes then two people can choose to make a treat, hee!

Re: Trick or Treat: Bus

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zirconium - Date: 2012-10-31 02:51 pm (UTC) - Expand

From:

cadenzamuse

Lipstick tastes waxy
on my lips but looks sweet on
yours: may I taste them?

From:

untonuggan

^_^

From:

spiralsheep

Leaves infused to taste;
with milk, sweetness, or spices.
Warm hands, self, and thoughts.

From:

zirconium

it's taken two years
to steep my way through the tin --
what to show for it?

Re: Trick or Treat: Tea

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spiralsheep - Date: 2012-10-31 03:22 pm (UTC) - Expand

From:

cadenzamuse

my mother showed me:
leave a little for the pot.
respect the small gods.

Re: Trick or Treat: Tea

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spiralsheep - Date: 2012-11-01 10:33 am (UTC) - Expand

Re: Trick or Treat: Tea

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untonuggan - Date: 2012-11-02 01:41 am (UTC) - Expand

From:

spiralsheep

Conversations/exchanges with the dead/ancestral spirits (that should be a flexible enough theme to give challengees some scope). :-)

From:

zirconium

she said, "wrong lipstick."
i cover all the mirrors
to block her visits.

Re: Conversations/exchanges with the dead/ancestral spirits.

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spiralsheep - Date: 2012-10-31 03:18 pm (UTC) - Expand

From:

primeideal

"Things makes sense from here--
But you forget we used to
Fumble just like you."

Re: Conversations/exchanges with the dead/ancestral spirits.

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spiralsheep - Date: 2012-10-31 10:25 pm (UTC) - Expand

From:

raze

I'm not proud to say:
I screamed when I saw the ghost
A hollow-eyed frown

His only response
Then: "Why do I frighten you?"
I had to think, said,

"I suppose you make
me contemplate my own death
hence my discomfort."

Saying it aloud
seemed rude; I blushed, but he laughed.
"My lady, I can

think of nothing so
terrifying as living.
Perhaps I should scream?"

Re: Conversations/exchanges with the dead/ancestral spirits.

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spiralsheep - Date: 2012-11-01 10:34 am (UTC) - Expand

From:

alee_grrl

Why are you living
so obsessed with the words of
we dead? Focus on living

your own lives. At the very
least get your quotes correct.

Re: Conversations/exchanges with the dead/ancestral spirits.

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spiralsheep - Date: 2012-11-01 10:35 am (UTC) - Expand

From:

cadenzamuse

"Grandpa, are you still
listening to my chatter?"
"I'm dead: gossip's slow."

Re: Conversations/exchanges with the dead/ancestral spirits.

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spiralsheep - Date: 2012-11-01 10:36 am (UTC) - Expand

From:

raze

But what do the MONSTERS wear to costume parties?

From:

alee_grrl

skin's a bit loose
do you think this human
costume's silly

Edited Date: 2012-11-01 12:07 am (UTC)

And on the other hand :)

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cadenzamuse - Date: 2012-11-01 01:26 am (UTC) - Expand

Re: And on the other hand :)

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raze - Date: 2012-11-01 07:27 pm (UTC) - Expand

Re: Trick or Treat: Monster Costumes

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raze - Date: 2012-11-01 07:28 pm (UTC) - Expand

Re: Trick or Treat: Monster Costumes

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spiralsheep - Date: 2012-11-01 09:33 pm (UTC) - Expand

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spiralsheep

King of Hearts costume -
aim for well-groomed and wealthy -
robe, sceptre, and crown.

It wouldn't do to show my
monstrous thoughts on the outside.

Re: Trick or Treat!

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raze - Date: 2012-11-01 07:27 pm (UTC) - Expand

From:

avia

i wear my own face
but you don't see the monster
in costume all year

(no subject)

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raze - Date: 2012-11-02 12:53 am (UTC) - Expand

From:

cadenzamuse

Because it's yummy. :)

From:

zirconium

[indeed! :-) ]

cooking vindaloo:
cider melding with cumin.
the velvety sauce

coats the chicken bones.
there's enough for the living
and also our dead.