Date: 2012-01-05 05:25 am (UTC)
alee_grrl: A kitty peeking out from between a stack of books and a cup of coffee. (Default)
From: [personal profile] alee_grrl
I haven't had a chance to go and read the full story and poems that this work complements, but I wanted to let you know how beautiful I though your sample was. The simple design draws the focus to the words, and the script of the words drew my eye onward to the next. Having it done in sections was nice. I felt like I was getting the highlights of emotion and plot of the main work, like a good movie trailer. In this case the sample completes the work by enticing new readers in. "See this lovely thing here. What to know where it comes from? Well follow me..." We often think of complements as being the end of a work, but the can be beginnings and middles as well. I hope that this makes some sense. I'm about to head to bed, and one never knows how coherent one is at that point.

Thank you for sharing this lovely work.
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