Thanks so much for the detailed feedback! I'm so glad you asked me to do this. It's been a while since I put something to music (except for an as yet unfinished semi-fannish project).
I experimented a bit with harmonies on the first lines (the "some men say" ones) so as to have a chorus of men, but I wasn't happy with how it came out. If I'd had my sister there to sing with me, perhaps.
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Date: 2013-09-19 08:57 am (UTC)I experimented a bit with harmonies on the first lines (the "some men say" ones) so as to have a chorus of men, but I wasn't happy with how it came out. If I'd had my sister there to sing with me, perhaps.