Quick note for those who may have missed it, my English Haikai post was started yesterday and posted today, which led to Dreamwidth placing it as having been posted 'Oct. 20th, 2012 14:23' and slipping into people's Reading Page history accordingly. Oops. Anyway, I hope you'll check it out - I thought there was some really interesting stuff going on in the earlier Haiku, Take Two post's comments.