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lnhammer ([personal profile] lnhammer) wrote in [community profile] poetree 2012-09-28 04:47 pm (UTC)

That is an excellent sonnet.

(Even aside from the content, I especially like its demonstration of controlling the pacing of a sonnet, which is not something that gets talked about much. But then, pacing is rarely talked about in lyric forms, as opposed to narrative and dramatic ones.)

---L.

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