untonuggan: Two African American men gazing at a sign reading "March on Washington for Jobs and Freedom" (bayard rustin)
lizcommotion ([personal profile] untonuggan) wrote in [community profile] poetree 2012-09-15 01:30 pm (UTC)

I really like what you've done with the repeat stanzas, and with alluding to different historical periods. Good job! (Pain day, otherwise would comment more.)
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